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Request: So Dramatic by ForeshadowART Request: So Dramatic by ForeshadowART
So this unicorn, Anzu ( *Anzu18 ), is pretty pissed at Twilight Sparkle for some reason. So they're fighting. On a cliff. In a storm with just lightning and no rain. PRETTY DRAMATIC HOT DAMN! Why are they there? I dunno. What are they fighting about? I dunno. Who will win? I DUNNO!
=D
Also Anzu is sort of like an evil crystal pony or something like that, she's supposed to be King Sombra's buddy from what I gathered of other pictures of her.

Oooh, it was really nice to draw a canon pony for some reason.

Twilight Sparkle Hasbro and Lauren Faust --> :iconfyre-flye:

Anzu belongs to *Anzu18

Requested by ~rapter347
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:iconmylittleprimo:
You know, I think you've got the right idea! But they seem to invest insufficient effort.  Twilight is passionate about... whatever she's fighting for.  As for Anzu, being mentored by Sombra should mean more than just small bolts of magic; she just doesn't seem to be trying hard enough against Twilight.  In fact, neither of them seem to be trying hard enough against each other.

It would also help to know what they're fighting about, if only to help invest the viewers in this battle.

But the "drama" of this piece, well, leaves quite a bit to be desired.
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
What do you mean by "specific artistic critique?"
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ForeshadowART Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Um... sorry you didn't like it?
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
I don't, but that's not what I'm saying.  I'm just saying it can be better.
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ForeshadowART Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do you have any specific artistic critique? This image is over a year old and I feel that I have improved since then, but any artistic critique is always appreciated. However, your comments seem to be mostly directed at the "story" of the image, which I didn't have much control over. Also, at the time, I was given no backstory to work with, only "this OC fighting Twilight Sparkle".
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
:confused:"Specific artistic critique?"
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ForeshadowART Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, like, for example, I feel like I've left too much space in the middle there that is devoid of action, where I could have probably made the characters closer and put in more dark crystals. Something like that.
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Here's what I was trying to say: all you really have to do is thicken the magical energy being used.  Don't just thicken the energy coming from their horns, but also have magic coalesce around them.
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ForeshadowART Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll keep that in mind for the next time I work on a magic battle picture, thank you! c: 
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mirona12 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
their fighting because they both want to destroy sunset shimmer
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